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One of the most memorable days with a strong impression on me was my first trip with my best friend when I was 10 years old.
After had known that my family traveled to Nha Trang city with Thao's family, we were extremely excited because this is the first time we have a long journey together. And the unforgettable day finally came. We departed quite early at 3:30 am. We were very happy and sang together on the car. The weather was perfect for a long trip: sunny and windy, quite cool and comfortable atmosphere. Five hours later, we reached the destination. The car stopped at the Oceanographic Museum. We eagerly ran down the car and ran straight into. Here, we discover many things about the sea, the fish, the seals and see the fossils of the sea cows. After that, we got in the car and went to the hotel to rest. In the afternoon we go to the sea and eat seafood. It is so interesting to eat seafood and watch the sea. After had eaten, we went to the beach and picked up the shells and buried them under the sand and promise each other that we will always be close friends. Perhaps after this trip our friendship was better than before. And I hope I and Thao will later be best friends forever and travel a lot together
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After had known that my family traveled to Nha Trang city with Thao's family, we were extremely excited because this is the first time we have a long journey together. And the unforgettable day finally came. We departed quite early at 3:30 am. We were very happy and sang together on the car. The weather was perfect for a long trip: sunny and windy, quite cool and comfortable atmosphere. Five hours later, we reached the destination. The car stopped at the Oceanographic Museum. We eagerly ran down the car and ran straight into. Here, we discover many things about the sea, the fish, the seals and see the fossils of the sea cows. After that, we got in the car and went to the hotel to rest. In the afternoon we go to the sea and eat seafood. It is so interesting to eat seafood and watch the sea. After had eaten, we went to the beach and picked up the shells and buried them under the sand and promise each other that we will always be close friends. Perhaps after this trip our friendship was better than before. And I hope I and Thao will later be best friends forever and travel a lot together
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