The following passage contains TEN mistakes. Find out the mistakes and correct them as the example below

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The following passage contains TEN mistakes. Find out the mistakes and correct them as the example below.

0. line 1: fit → fits

HELP ALWAYS AT HAND: A MOBILE IS A GIRL'S BEST FRIEND

            If it fit inside a pocket, keeps you safely as well as in touch with your office, your mother and your children, it is certainly worth to have. This is the view of the dwelling ranks of female mobile-phone users which are beginning to dominate the consumer market. Although Britain has been demonstrated to be one of the most expensive place in the world to run a mobile phone, both professional women with full-time mothers are undeterred. At first, the mobile phone was a rich man's plaything, or a businessman's status symbol. Now women own almost as many telephones than men do - but for very different reasons. The main attraction for most women customers is that it provides a form of communications back-up, wherever they are, in spite of emergency. James Tanner of Tancroft Communications says: "The major of people buy phones from us this year were women - often young women - or men who were buying for their mothers, wives and girlfriends. And it always seems to be a question of peace of mind." Size is also crucial for women. They want something that will fit in a handbag," said Mr Tanner. "The tiny phones coming in is having a very big impact. This year's models are only half the size of your hand."