Each student must write an essay on gender equality

-Each student must write an essay on gender equality.
=> An essay on gender must be written by each student

-The Vietnamese government will make more progress in gender equality.
=> More progress will be made by the Vietnamese government in gender equality

viết câu thứ 2 thành: “More progress in gender equality will be made by the Vietnamese government “ có đúng không? tại sao?