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Volunteering today is a type of community activity that attracts a large number of participants. And I was no exception. I want to raise money for street children. I want to do it because I will be able to bring joy and happiness to them and my contribution will help change their lives. I will make postcards and sell them to raise funds. We will use that money to buy books, clothes and food for them. I think it will mean a lot to them.