Các bạn ơi giúp mình sửa lại bài văn tiếng anh này với
Các bạn ơi giúp mình sửa lại bài văn tiếng anh này với , thông cảm vì sự ngu anh này
From: Lan Chi
To: Huyen
Subject: Places of interest in my city
Dear Eren,
It's great to know that you're coming to Vietnam. Although you can stay in Tuyen Quang for only one day. I'm sure you can visit the most beautiful destinations here. The one-day trip will include three places. First, we will go to the Ha Temple. This is the most spiritual place in Tuyen Quang, people often come here to pray for luck for the family, we will also come to pray for good luck and admire the beautiful scenery here. Then, let's visit Tuyen Quang Provincial Museum, which keeps many historical and cultural relics and is also the place where scientific research in many aspects of the province is carried out. This will be the right place that we should visit so that you can understand more about Tuyen Quang as well as its history. Finally, there is My Lam mineral spring area, only about 13 km from the center of Tuyen Quang city, here you can not only relax in mineral springs but also participate in many other entertainment activities.
Believe me! It would be really worth a try to tell me when you are coming , so I can take you to travel around
Look forward to seeing you soon!
Best wishes ,
Lan Chi
From: Lan Chi
To: Huyen
Subject: Places of interest in my city
Dear Eren,
It's great to know that you're coming to Vietnam. Although you can stay in Tuyen Quang for only one day. I'm sure you can visit the most beautiful destinations here. The one-day trip will include three places. First, we will go to the Ha Temple. This is the most spiritual place in Tuyen Quang, people often come here to pray for luck for the family, we will also come to pray for good luck and admire the beautiful scenery here. Then, let's visit Tuyen Quang Provincial Museum, which keeps many historical and cultural relics and is also the place where scientific research in many aspects of the province is carried out. This will be the right place that we should visit so that you can understand more about Tuyen Quang as well as its history. Finally, there is My Lam mineral spring area, only about 13 km from the center of Tuyen Quang city, here you can not only relax in mineral springs but also participate in many other entertainment activities.
Believe me! It would be really worth a try to tell me when you are coming , so I can take you to travel around
Look forward to seeing you soon!
Best wishes ,
Lan Chi