Soil pollution is one of the most significant problem in Vietnam

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Soil pollution is one of the most significant problem in Vietnam. Soil pollution comes from many different causes. First, soil pollution happens when human activities destroy the earth’s surface. Second, pesticides, herbicides, deforestation,... all are causes that make the soil polluted. The consequences are that: the soil is erosed, the upper layer of soil is damaged, and the homes for wild animals may disappear forever. We need to limit the use of pesticides as well as chemicals in agricultural production. Next, we need to expand the area of trees, prevent deforestation.