Hello Teacher, today I am going to tell you about the festival I went to. It's the Mid-Autumn Festival, which is my favourite festival

Hello Teacher, today I am going to tell you about the festival I went to. It's the Mid-Autumn Festival, which is my favourite festival. It was held on the 15th of August at my house and I invited you all to come. First, we watched TV together and chatted in the living room. Then we played with lanterns and ate fruit together. Sometimes we play games together like ff, league, etc. Finally, the thing I'm most looking forward to is eating moon cakes, we eat them together and I think it's very tasty. In short, I really like the Mid-Autumn Festival. Even though it's very simple, I really like it because it helps me have fun, connect with friends and understand them better.
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