Write a paragraph about the benefits of sharing housework among family members

đề là: write a paragraph about the benefits of sharing housework among family members
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In my family, we consistently share housework, such as sweep the floor, dry clothes, wash dishes, etc., with other members in my family. By doing this, it provides for us some benefits. Firstly, sharing housework can help our reduce our parents' stressed as well as make them smile after a hard-working day. Secondly, it ensures our living environment always clean and comfortable. Moreover, it can make we more closer although we do very simple household. What's more, if we do housework, it will let our hair down after school. In general, sharing housework is very good for us and our family.