Kiểm tra xem 2 đoạn văn này có lỗi gì không (chính tả, cấu trúc,...)

Kiểm tra xem 2 đoạn văn này có lỗi gì không (chính tả, cấu trúc,...)
  Leisure activities: Today I will tell you about my favourite activities in my free time. This is playing soccer. Every day, when I finished studying, I would play football with my friends. The place where we usually play football is in the grass field. The yard is always filled with our cheers and cheers. On the pitch, I feel like we are a real soccer player. Some run very fast towards the goal, the other prevents you from kicking,… Football is a healthy sport, it also helps me entertain after stressful lessons. I love football so much.

  Life in the countryside: Some people really prefer to live in the city because of its facilities. But I prefer to live in the countryside because of many reasons. First of all, life in the countryside is very peaceful and fresh. There aren’t many vehicles moving on the road. Secondly, people are friendly and expandsive to each other. They are willing to help whenever someone meet with difficulties. Finally, food is fresh and cheap. Speacially, vegertables are grown naturally and always available. I really feel secure about food’s quality. To sum up, the life of countryside is the suitable place for me to live.