Bài này mình làm đúng ngữ pháp chưa, nếu sai thì giúp mình sửa với

Bài này mình làm đúng ngữ pháp chưa nếu sai thì giúp mình sửa với. Trả lời mình sẽ chấm điểm


Vung Tau is an familiar spot for people in the East South area of Vietnam.It has a long beach and many majestic mountains.Tourists often come here because it is very quiet and clean.But what attracts me are the temples, it makes me go around and look at them.The attraction is old lighthouse, it was built in 1907, from the lighthouse we can see the majestic mountains.