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My mother is the person I love the most in my life. My mother is a housewife. She is very young and beautiful with a 45 year old. She is of average height with long black hair, a high nose and an oval face. my mother is a friendly and caring woman . My mother always takes care of me from meal to sleep. Moreover, she is the first to help me when I'm in trouble. She is full of helpful suggestions for me to handle everything. I often say ‘I love you , mom’. To me, my mother is the most perfect woman in my life.