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There are some characteristics shared by most Vietnamese people. The first characteristic is saving money. Vietnamese people is very saving, they save money from young to old. Some people work all their life just for their offspring after that. The second characteristic is Follow the crowd. They will follow the idea of many people even if it’s wrong. Seems silly? But it's right. This happens on social networks a lot. For example, when there are some the phenomenon of grinding out in the life, Vietnamese people will listen to the majority, maybe it's wrong they still believe until there has any evidence. The third characteristic is love football: People tend to celebrate whenever Vietnamese football team wins. They were so excited to hear the news of the win. When Vietnam team won, they pour into the street to celebrate. These features are believed to be part of the Vietnamese character.

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