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Mình xin cảm ơn ạ.
REALITY
Throughout his life, he thought that he always understood himself. He did anything he would and had everything that he never thought about. He used to have some friends, some teachers who liked him. He used to have some money, some brothers who always helped and listened to him. He also has a family who loves him by the way he thinks he never knows. And he thinks about his job. He is a lucky person. Especially, he always has help from others when he is in trouble. So he is very grateful for everything and everyone that came into his life. He appreciates that very much.
At present, he no longer believes that he understands himself very well. He is always trying to listen to himself, but he doesn't feel like he is getting anywhere. Suddenly, he realized he's slowly forgetting some memories day by day. So, one day he isn't also afraid that he isn't able to remember who he is. Because he couldn't keep anything in his head. He thinks these things happen in different ways. So he accepted it.
Sometimes, he refuses to face reality. He is out of touch with reality. He just remembers a poem from a movie that he liked best:
"Another lover hits the universe
The circle is broken, but with death comes rebirth.
And like all lovers as sad people
I am a poet"
He is also having his adventures and is on long and wide journeys. He used to be a loser in his life and he was to love someone. The love makes him realized he is also like dust in the vast universe. He is also a normal human. He is very small. But with those things, he is special in his way. He believes he will go far away, but it depends on how fast he goes.
Mình xin cảm ơn ạ.
REALITY
Throughout his life, he thought that he always understood himself. He did anything he would and had everything that he never thought about. He used to have some friends, some teachers who liked him. He used to have some money, some brothers who always helped and listened to him. He also has a family who loves him by the way he thinks he never knows. And he thinks about his job. He is a lucky person. Especially, he always has help from others when he is in trouble. So he is very grateful for everything and everyone that came into his life. He appreciates that very much.
At present, he no longer believes that he understands himself very well. He is always trying to listen to himself, but he doesn't feel like he is getting anywhere. Suddenly, he realized he's slowly forgetting some memories day by day. So, one day he isn't also afraid that he isn't able to remember who he is. Because he couldn't keep anything in his head. He thinks these things happen in different ways. So he accepted it.
Sometimes, he refuses to face reality. He is out of touch with reality. He just remembers a poem from a movie that he liked best:
"Another lover hits the universe
The circle is broken, but with death comes rebirth.
And like all lovers as sad people
I am a poet"
He is also having his adventures and is on long and wide journeys. He used to be a loser in his life and he was to love someone. The love makes him realized he is also like dust in the vast universe. He is also a normal human. He is very small. But with those things, he is special in his way. He believes he will go far away, but it depends on how fast he goes.