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I have had a memorable experience of my life. Now, I'm 18 years old. This time last year, I was struggling with the exam papers to prepare for the entrance exam. I was very worried and scared. Everyone around tries, so do I. I cannot forget the time I studied hard all day with friends and teachers. All my friends helped me a lot. They taught me many things that I did not understand. They excite me, which makes me determined to pass the important exam. Besides, there is my family. In particular, my mother took care of me a lot and very well. I really thank my mother for her love with me. I also never forget this time. It was very tired, but it was also great.