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30/01/2021 16:34:36

Essay writing: Many people think that students should not use Facebook as it can have negative impactson their lives. Do you agree or disagree? In about 250 words, write an essay to express your opinion. You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence

III. Essay writing (1.0 pt)
Many people think that students should not use Facebook as it can have negative impacts
on their lives.Do you agree or disagree?
In about 250 words, write an essay to express your opinion. You should use your own ideas,
knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

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Kinomoto Hanako
30/01/2021 16:45:03
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Social networking websites like Facebook, Twitter, and Instagram have become an important part of our everyday life. However, many people think that students should not use Facebook as it can have negative impacts on their lives. I strongly agree with the thought that social websites have a profound negative effect.

To begin with, both people’s behavior and the well-being of society are detrimental influenced by access social networking sites. First, many minors and celebrities are easily bullied and harassed by vulgar and hurtful information in the Internet. For instance, when their nude photos or scandals are widely spread on it, they can suffer anxiety, depression, and even suicide. Second, users are led to diverge from the real life because of abusing applications of social network too much. They resembling slavish individuals and they entirely believe in virtual world’s information. This make people have vague feeling with reality, scare people around and significantly reduce social cohesion.
Addiction is another drawback of social networks that leads to failure in almost every field. Most people waste hours in front of computers or mobile phones chatting and posting on Facebook and Twitter and thus they fail to pay attention to their work. For instance, students do not perform their best in the exams or fail because they spend more time online instead of studying. As a result, social networking sites hinder the progress of the individual and also of the society.

In conclusion, although Facebook and such sites are beneficial to some extent, I strongly agree with the argument that they have a more detrimental effect on both the local community and the people. It is hoped that users will realize this and learn to use such platforms more judiciously.

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Khanh Linh Nguyen
30/01/2021 17:03:13
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With the worldwide growth of the Internet, never before have human beings witnessed the quick development of social networks. Facebook, an outstanding element of this trend, has become an irreplaceable part of modern society, influencing the way young people approach education and spending their free time. Some specialists are concerned that Facebook might negatively affect students' performance and well-beings. Others believe that Facebook provides individuals with opportunities to widen their social circle. In my opinion, this online platform possesses both benefits and risks to its young users.

It is true that constant exposure to technological device to update Facebook has a perilous effect on students' health. Radiation emitted from phones and computers might deteriorate their concentration span and contribute to eye problems such as myopic, which decreases achievements of students at school. Moreover, teenagers constantly seek to receive the latest information. Facebook's unique feature that satisfies this need could cause addiction among young users. Consequently, it leads to the reduction of interest in studying and participating in outdoor activities.

Despite its negative impacts on the daily life of students, Facebook gives modern teenagers more possibilities to network than ever before. Knowing that over 8 million users log in Facebook everyday, major corporations KPMG, Deloitte and EY use it to reach out to prospective employees. Aspiring individuals can also promote themselves to these companies. therefore, gradually enrich their experience in various working sections and offer them a great deal of potential opportunities for future career simultaneously (câu này ngữ pháp bị sai). Moreover, as people need fast communication, Facebook enables its users to broaden their connection with people from different parts of the world. This application not only benefits each user individuallybut also contributes to the cultural aspects of globalisation.

In conclusion, Facebook impacts modern society in different ways. To maximise this social network's positive influence and minimise its negative consequence, young users should reduce their dependence on Facebook and regard it as an effective mean to build a network and educate themselves.

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