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In Vietnam, there are also some big holidays like in other countries. Among those big holidays, I like Tet the most, especially Tet in my hometown.
My hometown is very crowded every Tet holiday. In the days approaching Tet, markets suddenly become busier. The Tet market has a lot of items from food, drinks to clothes, shoes... The color red is the most popular day of Tet, so the whole market seems to be surrounded by crimson, symbolizing luck.
On the thirtieth day of Tet, the whole family is busy to welcome the new year, everything must be done before 12 o'clock at night.
I remember when I was 9 years old, my grandmother wrapped a lot of banh tet. I sat next to her and watched her wrap the banh tet and begged her to wrap me a small banh tet. She smiled kindly and she wrapped for me one. I was extremely happy. That night I decided to stay up by the fire to cook cakes with my dad, but for some reason I fell asleep in my dad's arms all the time. In my joy, the New Year's Eve dinner that year was full of delicious dishes in my eyes.
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Gửi e tham khảo thôi nhé : tại a lướt sơ sơ qua thấy đc vài lỗi :
"The color red is the most popular day of Tet" - Câu này không rõ nghĩa, có thể sửa thành "The color red is the most popular during Tet."
"Everyone will clean their house to welcome the new year" - Câu này có thể sửa thành "Everyone cleans their house to welcome the new year."
"In my joy, the New Year's Eve dinner that year was full of delicious dishes in my eyes." - Câu này có thể sửa thành "In my joy, the New Year's Eve dinner that year looked full of delicious dishes to me."
"The following days, my whole family went together to wish relatives New Year." - Câu này có thể sửa thành "In the following days, my whole family went together to wish relatives a Happy New Year."
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