Writing a paragraph about the advantages and disadvantager of a shopping place

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• Writing a paragraph about the advantages and disadvantages of a shopping place
I. Write a paragraph about the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping, using
the cues given below. Use the words showing the sequence: firstly, secondly, next, finally, to
begin with, in addition, furthermore.
Nowadays most prefer online shopping. Online shopping offers a lot of benefits.
1. buy items / their homes and workplace in comfort
2. in online shopping /customers/ not have to stand in lines / pay / the goods /save time
3. big discounts/website sellers to attract more customers / save money
4. the buyer / many options and many brands / choose / a place / because/ a large volume of
stock available
However, there are also some disadvantages of online shopping.
5. in online shopping / a product / go / through different places / meet the product / the wrong
colour, the wrong size, or damage
6. not easy / the customer / exchange the product / the customer / complete several forms
7. a risk of hacking/ identity theft or credit card fraud
Nowadays we have to use online shopping in a good way, but we can also go to a supermarket
or an open-air market.