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The following sentences are badly constructed. Rewrite them in better style and correct any grammatical errors

Part 4:   The following sentences are badly constructed. Rewrite them in better style and correct any grammatical errors. (5 points)

  1. All students must pay their fees, except foreigners, to the university bursar.

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  1. Swimming is a sport to any healthy person I would recommend.

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  1. The president said that the new education programme was essential addressing a large audience in the provincial capital yesterday.

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  1. Talks have begun to plan a railway linking the provincial capitals between the representatives of the provincial assemblies.

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  1. The advertisement said that they wished to employ a secretary for an expanding company with good shorthand and typing speeds at their head office.

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Sure, here are the corrected sentences with improved style and grammar:

1. **All students, except foreigners, must pay their fees to the university bursar.**

2. **I would recommend swimming as a sport to any healthy person.**

3. **Addressing a large audience in the provincial capital yesterday, the president said that the new education programme was essential.**

4. **Representatives of the provincial assemblies have begun talks to plan a railway linking the provincial capitals.**

5. **The advertisement stated that they wished to employ a secretary with good shorthand and typing speeds for an expanding company at their head office.**
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Ngọc Mai
09/07 09:36:11
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1, All students, except foreigners, must pay their fees to the university bursar.

2, Swimming is a sport I would recommend to any healthy person.

3, Addressing a large audience in the provincial capital yesterday, the president said that the new education programme was essential.

4, Talks have begun between the representatives of the provincial assemblies to plan a railway linking the provincial capitals.

5, The advertisement said that an expanding company wished to employ a secretary with good shorthand and typing speeds at their head office.

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Phương
09/07 09:36:25
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  1. All students, except foreigners, must pay their fees to the university bursar.

  2. I would recommend swimming as a sport for any healthy person.

  3. The president, addressing a large audience in the provincial capital yesterday, said that the new education programme was essential.

  4. Representatives of the provincial assemblies have begun talks to plan a railway linking the provincial capitals.

  5. The advertisement stated that they wished to employ a secretary with good shorthand and typing speeds for an expanding company at their head office.

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Chou
09/07 09:36:29
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  1. Corrected: All students must pay their fees to the university bursar, except for foreigners.  (Clarifies the exception)
  2. Corrected: Swimming is a sport that I would recommend to any healthy person. (Improves sentence flow and adds pronoun)
  3. Corrected: The president said that the new education programme was essential for addressing the needs of the country. (Clarifies the purpose)
  4. Corrected: Talks have begun between representatives of the provincial assemblies to plan a railway linking the provincial capitals. (Improves clarity on who is involved)
  5. Corrected: The advertisement stated that their expanding company at the head office is seeking to employ a secretary with good shorthand and typing speeds. (More formal phrasing and clarifies company location)
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