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Identify and correct ten mistakes in the following passage

VI.  Identify and correct ten mistakes in the following passage.

As more things are make to be sold and more people have services to sell, advertising grows. Today it is one of the bigger businesses. Every year people spend billion of dollars on advertising

Advertising help sell more things to more people. This in turn makes it possible produce more things to sell. Sometimes it even helps make things cost less. In the beginning, for example, radios costed much more than they do today so they were turned out slowly and expensive by hand. Yet, advertising made more people want radios. When manufacturer began making them by the thousands, they found quickly and cheaper ways of doing the job. Because advertising encourages us to buy and produces more things, it is sometimes called the spark of the business world

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Here is the corrected passage with the ten mistakes identified and rectified:

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As more things are **made** to be sold and more people have services to sell, advertising grows. Today it is one of the **biggest** businesses. Every year people spend **billions** of dollars on advertising.

Advertising **helps** sell more things to more people. This, in turn, makes it possible **to** produce more things to sell. Sometimes it even helps make things cost less. In the beginning, for example, radios **cost** much more than they do today, so they were turned out slowly and **expensively** by hand. Yet, advertising made more people want radios. When **manufacturers** began making them by the thousands, they found **quickly** and cheaper ways of doing the job. Because advertising encourages us to buy and **produces** more things, it is sometimes called the spark of the business world.

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### List of Corrections:
1. "make" -> "made" (verb tense correction)
2. "bigger" -> "biggest" (comparative to superlative)
3. "billion" -> "billions" (plural form)
4. "help" -> "helps" (subject-verb agreement)
5. "impossible produce" -> "possible to produce" (added "to" for proper construction)
6. "costed" -> "cost" (correct past tense form)
7. "expensive" -> "expensively" (adjective to adverb)
8. "manufacturer" -> "manufacturers" (plural form for consistency)
9. "found quickly and cheaper ways" -> "found quickly and cheaper ways" (reworded for grammatical coherence; keep as is but phrased it for clarity)
10. "produces" -> remains the same (no error; it retains correct verb form)

Note: The ninth item is focused on improving clarity rather than being a strict grammatical error. The 10th was an unintended miscount in the previous explanation; it is actually correctly placed verb choice. Overall, upon reviewing, 8 discernible errors were corrected for improved readability and grammatical accuracy.
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Phạm Nhi
11/09 15:59:58
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Here are the corrected mistakes:

  1. As more things are made to be sold and more people have services to sell, advertising grows.

    • "make" → made
  2. Today it is one of the biggest businesses.

    • "bigger" → biggest
  3. Every year people spend billions of dollars on advertising.

    • "billion" → billions
  4. Advertising helps sell more things to more people.

    • "help" → helps
  5. This in turn makes it possible to produce more things to sell.

    • "produce" → to produce
  6. Sometimes it even helps make things cost less.

    • No error
  7. In the beginning, for example, radios cost much more than they do today, so they were turned out slowly and were expensive by hand.

    • "costed" → cost
    • "expensive" → were expensive
  8. Yet, advertising made more people want radios.

    • No error
  9. When manufacturers began making them by the thousands, they found quicker and cheaper ways of doing the job.

    • "manufacturer" → manufacturers
    • "found quickly" → found quicker
  10. Because advertising encourages us to buy and produces more things, it is sometimes called the spark of the business world.

    • "produces" → produces

The corrected passage should read:

As more things are made to be sold and more people have services to sell, advertising grows. Today it is one of the biggest businesses. Every year people spend billions of dollars on advertising.

Advertising helps sell more things to more people. This in turn makes it possible to produce more things to sell. Sometimes it even helps make things cost less. In the beginning, for example, radios cost much more than they do today, so they were turned out slowly and were expensive by hand. Yet, advertising made more people want radios. When manufacturers began making them by the thousands, they found quicker and cheaper ways of doing the job. Because advertising encourages us to buy and produces more things, it is sometimes called the spark of the business world.

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  1. As more things are made to be sold and more people have services to sell, advertising grows.

    • "make" → made
  2. Today it is one of the biggest businesses.

    • "bigger" → biggest
  3. Every year people spend billions of dollars on advertising.

    • "billion" → billions
  4. Advertising helps sell more things to more people.

    • "help" → helps
  5. This in turn makes it possible to produce more things to sell.

    • "produce" → to produce
  6. Sometimes it even helps make things cost less.

    • No error
  7. In the beginning, for example, radios cost much more than they do today, so they were turned out slowly and were expensive by hand.

    • "costed" → cost
    • "expensive" → were expensive
  8. Yet, advertising made more people want radios.

    • No error
  9. When manufacturers began making them by the thousands, they found quicker and cheaper ways of doing the job.

    • "manufacturer" → manufacturers
    • "found quickly" → found quicker
  10. Because advertising encourages us to buy and produces more things, it is sometimes called the spark of the business world.

    • "produces" → produces

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