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Viết essay. Write an essay (150 - 300 words) about this topic: Some people think children should have the freedom to make mistakes, while other people believe that adults should prevent children from making mistakes

Viết essay
Write an essay (150 - 300 words) about this topic:
Some people think children should have the freedom to make mistakes, while other people believe that adults should prevent children from making mistakes. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
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Th Vinh
20/08/2021 16:22:51
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Committing and correcting mistakes is part and parcel of one’s life. For the sake of children, some strongly advocate that children have the right to make mistakes while others refute it and believe in the necessity of wrongdoings prevention. Both sides have merits depending on the nature and influence of mistakes.

Minor mistakes during the process of learning and growth help children make progress. During parenting and schooling, it takes time for children to comprehend before their knowledge accumulates and before they are capable of putting learnt knowledge into practice. In addition, young students themself can hardly possess methods in checking the flaws of newly acquired ideas, hence questions, quizzes and tests are invented and designed to trigger inaccuracy and misunderstanding so that teachers can adjust children’s progress or help them review the parts that have not been fully comprehended. In the context of growth, toddlers learn to avoid sharp corners of tables by getting pain from them; pupils get to know the importance of bringing stationery after forgetting to leave it at home; teenagers realize the function of teamwork by losing games due to solo playing.

However, as far as the permanent physical or mental damage is concerned, mistakes should be prevented before tragedies. From day one, parents must guarantee that their kindergarten is away from fire, deep water and motorways to avoid lethal damage. They should also control the occurrence of repeated mistakes as this pattern indicates delays in children’s reasoning. Lastly, wrongdoings and dangerous thoughts can not be overlooked even if they are minor ones as they have life-long influences and may lead to harm to others and subsequent prison sentences.

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Unnie
20/08/2021 16:23:17
There are different attitudes towards making
mistakes
. Whether or not parents should give sufficient freedom for
children
to make
mistakes
has been a hot topic. Both
side
of the argument will be discussed in
this
essay before an appropriate conclusion is given.
Firstly
, what the opposing side of the debate is always arguing is that preventing
children
from making
mistakes
will shape them to be more self-disciplined.
For example
, a friend of mine, who was taught to avoid
mistakes
in every aspect of life, has a very high standard for herself. What is more, she always makes detailed plans and carefully checks her work before
submitting
.
Therefore
,
children
who were told not to make
mistakes
may be more likely to make academic achievements, like what she does in schoolwork. Controversially, it could
also
be argued that parents should allow
children
to make some
mistakes
so that
children
can be more self-esteemed, which is the point that I
tent
to believe. Using myself as an example, I was told not to be afraid of
mistakes
when I was very young.
Thus
, I became quite brave and confident
expressing
my own ideas.
Moreover
, I am always enthusiastic
in
challenging myself, which allows me to make progress from time to time.
Hence
, it is supported that
children
who are encouraged not to fear
mistakes
tend to be bolder and more confident. In conclusion, both allowing and discouraging
children
to make
mistakes
could have benefits in their development.
However
, I tend to believe that parents should encourage
children
not to be afraid of making
mistakes
,
since
children
who
was
brought up in
this
way will have better performance when confronting challenges.
Furthermore
, I think making
mistakes
will become more acceptable in the future.

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