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My favorite leisure activity is playing basketball. I love playing
basketball because it gives me a lot of health benefits such as:
increase height, reduce stress and strengthen the immune system,
exercise endurance, develop cognitive ability. .. At first I felt very
weak in health and fitness, then through regular practice and playing
basketball, it helped me improve my health and achieve my ideal
height. In the future, I will continue to maintain this entertainment
activity.