Certainly! Let's identify the underlined parts in each sentence that are not correct and then offer the corrected version.

#### Section V:

1. **Incorrect:** Do you know a girl dressed in blue over there?
- **Correction:** Do you know the girl dressed in blue over there?

2. **Incorrect:** As soon as they will phone me, I'll contact you.
- **Correction:** As soon as they phone me, I'll contact you.

3. **Incorrect:** Tom, together with his 4 friends, have been chosen to take part in the next English contest.
- **Correction:** Tom, together with his 4 friends, has been chosen to take part in the next English contest.

4. **Incorrect:** He doesn't never go home before he has finished his homework.
- **Correction:** He never goes home before he has finished his homework.

5- **Incorrect:** Although Tim had been studying exceptionally hard but he didn't pass the exam.
- **Correction:** Although Tim had been studying exceptionally hard, he didn't pass the exam.

#### Section VI:

1. **Incorrect:** When I returned I found that they towed my car away.
- **Correction:** When I returned, I found that they had towed my car away.

2. **Incorrect:** It was important that we should be on time at the meeting tonight.
- **Correction:** It was important that we be on time at the meeting tonight.

3. **Incorrect:** I have three brothers, all of whom are businessman.
- **Correction:** I have three brothers, all of whom are businessmen.

4. **Incorrect:** I had to drive to the factory to pick up my brother, who's car wouldn't start.
- **Correction:** I had to drive to the factory to pick up my brother, whose car wouldn't start.

5. **Incorrect:** Though my house was cheaper than Jane's, it is bigger and the more attractive.
- **Correction:** Though my house was cheaper than Jane's, it is bigger and more attractive.

#### Section VII:

1. **Incorrect:** The town we visited was a four-days journey by bus from our hotel, so we took the train instead.
- **Correction:** The town we visited was a four-day journey by bus from our hotel, so we took the train instead.

2. **Incorrect:** The consumption of soft drinks, specially coca cola, exceeds that of any other beverage.
- **Correction:** The consumption of soft drinks, especially Coca-Cola, exceeds that of any other beverage.

3. **Incorrect:** In the past few years, this area has become heavily industrial.
- **Correction:** In the past few years, this area has become heavily industrialized.

4. **Incorrect:** Although he was very hard-working, but he got a very low score in the final examination.
- **Correction:** Although he was very hard-working, he got a very low score in the final examination.

5. **Incorrect:** The Department of Foreign Languages are located in the new building opposite the old one.
- **Correction:** The Department of Foreign Languages is located in the new building opposite the old one.

#### Section VIII:

1. **Incorrect:** Janet finally got used to cook on an electric stove after having a gas one for so long.
- **Correction:** Janet finally got used to cooking on an electric stove after having a gas one for so long.

2. **Incorrect:** I'd like to go out for dinner, but I don't feel like to eat out tonight.
- **Correction:** I'd like to go out for dinner, but I don't feel like eating out tonight.

3. **Incorrect:** Despite of the danger, they managed to cross the river during the night.
- **Correction:** Despite the danger, they managed to cross the river during the night.

4. **Incorrect:** Mary's mother gave her a new hat at her birthday.
- **Correction:** Mary's mother gave her a new hat for her birthday.

5. **Incorrect:** If I was in your place, I would make a trip to England.
- **Correction:** If I were in your place, I would make a trip to England.

6. **Incorrect:** I want to do it on myself because other people make me nervous.
- **Correction:** I want to do it by myself because other people make me nervous.