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Exercise 4. Read the script and correct the mistakes (There are 5 mistakes)
IELTS Speaking Part 2
Describe your favorite book

My favourite book is called the Hunger Games. It was wrote by Suzanne Collins, I think and it is a really good book. The story is set in North America, but at a time when things are very bad. It’s a story of a terrible society, which separated into districts. A boy and a girl from each district send to take part in the Hunger Games. These games are televised for everyone to see. The games are basically a fight to the death for the children taking part in. The story follows a girl called Katniss, who forced to take part in the games when she offers herself up instead of her sister. I like the story so much because it is very exciting. At first, I found it really horrifying, but the more I read it, the more I couldn’t put the book down. I was recommend this book by some friends and it didn’t disappoint me.
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**Describe your favorite book**

My favourite book is called *The Hunger Games*. It was written by Suzanne Collins, I think, and it is a really good book. The story is set in North America, but at a time when things are very bad. It’s a story of a terrible society, which is divided into districts. A boy and a girl from each district are chosen to take part in the Hunger Games. These games are televised for everyone to see. The games are basically a fight to the death for the children taking part. The story follows a girl named Katniss, who forced to take part in the games when she offers herself instead of her sister. I like the story so much because it is very exciting. At first, I found it really horrifying, but the more I read it, the more I couldn’t put the book down. I would recommend this book to some friends, and it didn’t disappoint me.

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### Corrections made:
1. Changed "wrote" to "written".
2. Changed "is a really good book" for consistency.
3. Altered "separated" to "which is divided".
4. Changed "send" to "are chosen."
5. Changed "a girl called Katniss" to "a girl named Katniss" for better flow.
6. Corrected "offers herself up instead of her sister" to "offers herself instead of her sister."
7. Replaced "the more I read it, the more I couldn't put the book down" with "the more I read it, the more I couldn’t put the book down."
8. Changed "I would recommend this book by some friends" to "I would recommend this book to some friends."

These corrections improve grammatical accuracy and clarity.
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Altrøx
29/07 16:09:47
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My favorite book is called The Hunger Games. It was written by Suzanne Collins, I think, and it is a really good book. The story is set in North America, but at a time when things are very bad. It’s a story of a terrible society, which is separated into districts. A boy and a girl from each district are sent to take part in the Hunger Games. These games are televised for everyone to see. The games are basically a fight to the death for the children taking part in them. The story follows a girl called Katniss, who is forced to take part in the games when she offers herself up instead of her sister. I like the story so much because it is very exciting. At first, I found it really horrifying, but the more I read it, the more I couldn’t put the book down. I was recommended this book by some friends and it didn’t disappoint me.

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Nguyệt
29/07 16:09:53
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1.  wrote -> written (ta luôn dùng động từ dạng V3/ed với mọi dạng bị động ở các thì)

2. and -> that (I think that.... tôi nghĩ rằng.... )

3. seperated -> is seperated (ta phải dùng dạng bị động vì xã hội không thể tự chính nó chia cắt mà cần có có sự tác động của con người)

4. forced -> is forced (cô gái này ''bị ép'' phải tham gia trò chơi này nên ta phải dùng dạng bị động)

5. recommend ->recommended (ta dùng V3/ed với mọi dạng bị động ở các thì)

 

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Hưngg
29/07 16:17:38
+3đ tặng

1.  wrote -> written 

2. and -> that 

3. seperated -> is seperated 

4. forced -> is forced 

5. recommend ->recommended 

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