* "I'm not fond of the colours of water lilies, otherwise, they don't smell very good."
   * Error: The use of "otherwise" here is incorrect. "Otherwise" typically introduces an alternative or consequence. In this context, a more suitable conjunction would be "although" or "even though".
   * Corrected: "I'm not fond of the colours of water lilies, although they don't smell very good."
 * "The due date for the final paper has passed, therefore, she could submit it on time."
   * Error: The logical connection is flawed. If the due date has passed, she could not submit it on time.
   * Corrected: "The due date for the final paper has passed, therefore, she could not submit it on time."
 * "Caruluna is a novelist, playwright, and poem; moreover, she is a distinguished scholar."
   * Error: "Poem" is a noun, not a profession. It should be "poet".
   * Corrected: "Caruluna is a novelist, playwright, and poet; moreover, she is a distinguished scholar."
 * "There are many books, so, none of them can be used as a reference for our project."
   * Error: The logic is inconsistent. If there are many books, it's possible that at least one could be used.
   * Corrected: This sentence might need rephrasing, depending on the context. For example, "Although there are many books, none of them seem suitable as a reference for our project."
 * "You must hurry up and you can't finish your assignment for the physics class on time."
   * Error: The two clauses contradict each other. If you must hurry up, you might be able to finish on time.
   * Corrected: "You must hurry up if you want to finish your assignment for the physics class on time."
 * "The law does not permit drinking and driving, nevertheless, there would be many accidents."
   * Error: The second clause doesn't follow logically from the first. The law prohibiting drinking and driving is intended to prevent accidents.
   * Corrected: "Despite the law prohibiting drinking and driving, there are still many accidents."