Here are the corrections for the text provided:

1. **live → lives**
Correction: "Miss Lien **lives** in a small house on Hanoi."

2. **is → has**
Correction: "She usually **has** breakfast at seven in the morning."

3. **go → goes**
Correction: "She **goes** for dinner at twelve o’clock in the canteen..."

4. **his → her**
Correction: "She teaches **her** students in the morning."

5. **students → student**
Correction: "She teaches **students** dialogues on Wednesdays and Fridays."

6. **Fridays → Friday**
Correction: "...dialogues on Wednesdays and **Friday**."

7. **teach → teaches**
Correction: "On Mondays, she **teaches** them grammar."

8. **the evening → evenings**
Correction: "On the **evenings**, she usually stays at home..."

9. **listens books → lists to books**
Correction: "...and **listens to** books."

10. **go → goes**
Correction: "She sometimes **goes** to the movie theatre."

The revised passage would read:

"Miss Lien lives in a small house on Hanoi. She teaches English at a school there. She usually has breakfast at seven in the morning and she has dinner at twelve o’clock in the canteen of the school. She teaches her students in the morning. She teaches students dialogues on Wednesdays and Friday. On Mondays, she teaches them grammar. On the evenings, she usually stays at home and listens to books. She sometimes goes to the movie theatre. She always goes to bed at ten o’clock."