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Read the following paragraph carefully and answer the questions below it

I. Read the following paragraph carefully and answer the questions below it. (4 ms)

     (1) The most important factor is a student's past experience of study. (2) If a student have already developed good study habits, study at university should not be difficult. (3) Good study habit need to be complemented by interest and motivation – factors which are important when competition gets tough. (4) This is even harder in some fields. (5) We should however not underestimate the distracting effects of financial and personal difficulties. (6) All students have to grapple with this at some stage of their university life. (7) Beyond the personal factors it has to be say that there is also a certain element of luck involved in success: this includes finding excellent teachers and the subject matter that inspires one to give one's best.


(Adapted from http://grammar.about.com/od/developingparagraphs/a/samdescpars.htm)

1. Does the paragraph unify? If it does not, which sentence does not support the topic sentence?
.............................................................................................................
2. Does the paragraph have a topic sentence? If it does, which sentence is it?
.............................................................................................................
3. There are 5 mistakes in the paragraph. Underline and correct them. One has been done for
you.
i) have → has
ii) …………………………………………………………………………………………..
iii) …………………………………………………………………………………………..
iv) …………………………………………………………………………………………..
v) …………………………………………………………………………………………..

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1. Yes, the paragraph unifies. However, sentence (4) “This is even harder in some fields.” does not explicitly support the main idea about a student's past experience and the factors affecting study habits.

2. Yes, the paragraph has a topic sentence. The topic sentence is (1) “The most important factor is a student's past experience of study.”

3. There are 5 mistakes in the paragraph. Here are the corrected mistakes:
i) have → has
ii) habits → habits'
iii) to be say → to say
iv) grapple → grapples
v) inspiring → inspires

(Note: ii) is ambiguous and depends on whether the intent is to indicate possession or grammatical structure. If the original intention is unclear, please validate with context. The other corrections reflect standard grammatical fixes.)
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Khánh
05/10 15:44:04
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1. Does the paragraph unify? If it does not, which sentence does not support the topic sentence?

Yes, the paragraph is unified. All sentences discuss factors that influence a student's success in university studies, supporting the main idea introduced in the first sentence.

2. Does the paragraph have a topic sentence? If it does, which sentence is it?

Yes, the topic sentence is: The most important factor is a student's past experience of study. This sentence introduces the main idea of the paragraph, focusing on what influences a student's success.

3. There are 5 mistakes in the paragraph. Underline and correct them. One has been done for you.

Here are the corrections for the mistakes:

i) have → has
ii) habit → habits (plural)
iii) say → said (past tense)
iv) it has to be say → it has to be said (passive voice)
v) should however → should, however, (insert commas for clarity)

Corrected Paragraph

(1) The most important factor is a student's past experience of study. (2) If a student has already developed good study habits, study at university should not be difficult. (3) Good study habits need to be complemented by interest and motivation – factors which are important when competition gets tough. (4) This is even harder in some fields. (5) We should, however, not underestimate the distracting effects of financial and personal difficulties. (6) All students have to grapple with this at some stage of their university life. (7) Beyond the personal factors, it has to be said that there is also a certain element of luck involved in success: this includes finding excellent teachers and the subject matter that inspires one to give one's best.

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05/10 16:40:37
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1. Does the paragraph unify?

Yes, the paragraph unifies. All the sentences discuss factors that influence a student's success at university, from past study habits to personal challenges and external factors like finding good teachers.

2. Does the paragraph have a topic sentence?

Yes, the paragraph has a topic sentence.

Sentence (1): "The most important factor is a student's past experience of study."

This sentence introduces the main idea, which is exploring the various factors that contribute to a student's success in university.

3. Mistakes in the paragraph:

i) Corrected: have → has (already done)

ii) Sentence (3): Good study habit need to be complemented --> Good study habits need to be complemented (subject-verb agreement)

iii) Sentence (4): This is even harder in some fields. --> This can be even harder in some fields. ( "can be" for a more general statement)

iv) Sentence (7): it has to be say that there is also a certain element of luck involved in success --> It should be said that there is also a certain element of luck involved in success (more formal phrasing)

v) Sentence (7): this includes finding excellent teachers and the subject matter that inspires one to give one's best --> this includes finding excellent teachers and a subject matter that inspires one to give their best (singular subject-verb agreement and avoiding redundancy)

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