Here are the 10 mistakes identified in the text along with their corrections:

1. **Mistake:** "Miss Lien live"
**Correction:** "Miss Lien lives"

2. **Mistake:** "she has dinner at twelve o'clock"
**Correction:** "she has dinner at twelve o’clock"

3. **Mistake:** "canteen of the school"
**Correction:** "canteen at the school"

4. **Mistake:** "she teaches them dialogues"
**Correction:** "she teaches them grammar"

5. **Mistake:** "On Mondays, she teach them grammar."
**Correction:** "On Mondays, she teaches them grammar."

6. **Mistake:** "usually stays at home and listens books."
**Correction:** "usually stays at home and listens to books."

7. **Mistake:** "Sometimes goes to the movie theatre."
**Correction:** "She sometimes goes to the movie theatre."

8. **Mistake:** "She always go to bed"
**Correction:** "She always goes to bed"

9. **Mistake:** "at ten o'clock."
**Correction:** "at ten o’clock."

10. **Mistake:** "homework at ten o'clock" (assumed from context, if applicable)
**Correction:** "at ten o’clock."

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