7. Gilbert Newton Lewis, a chemist, helped to develop the modern electron theory of valence, a theory explains the forces holding atoms together in molecules.
Error: The word "explains" should be changed to "that explains" to create a subordinate clause modifying the noun "theory."
8. Because of a high birthrate and considered immigration, the United States population in the late nineteenth century increased tremendously from 31 million in 1860 to 76 million in 1900.
Error: The word "considered" should be changed to "considerable" to modify the noun "immigration." "Considered" is a verb, while "considerable" is an adjective.
9. For most of their history, especially since the 1860's, New York City has been undergoing major ethnic population changes.
No error. This sentence is grammatically correct.
10. Rocks have forming, wearing away and re-forming ever since the Earth took shape.
Error: The word "forming" should be changed to "been forming" to indicate a continuous action that started in the past and continues to the present.