Sentence 1:
Original: I enjoy discover historic places in Ha Noi, and neither does she. Corrected: I enjoy discovering historic places in Ha Noi, and neither does she.
The verb "discover" should be in the gerund form when used after "enjoy".
Sentence 2:
Original: She is at the same old as me. Corrected: She is the same age as me.
The correct phrase to express similarity in age is "the same age as".
Sentence 3:
Original: He just bought a instrument for his mum on her birthday. Corrected: He just bought an instrument for his mum on her birthday.
*The word "instrument" is countable, so we need the article "an" before it.
Sentence 4:
Original: That smells very like to burning. Corrected: That smells very much like burning.
The correct phrase to express similarity in smell is "smell like".
Sentence 5:
Original: How much sandwiches do you want to buy? - Just two. Corrected: How many sandwiches do you want to buy? - Just two.
We use "many" to quantify countable nouns like "sandwiches". "Much" is used for uncountable nouns like "water" or "sugar".