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Compare and contrast the benefits of video games with other hobbies

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Some people have argued that video games are a waste of time, and people should spend their time and money on better hobbies.
Compare and contrast the benefits of video games with other hobbies. In your oppinion, which is more useful?Why?
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07/08/2020 10:17:07
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An increasing number of people believes that video games are a waste of time and money, and they suggest that people should find other better hobbies. This essay will argue that video games not only cause several problems, but also in some cases, they have some benefits.

The relevant aspect of that is related to healthy problems caused by video games. This kind of problems are increasingly frequent in the life of people who play video games for a long time because when you play video games, you don’t have physical activity like when you play sports, as basket or fencing. By contrast, the majority of other hobbies allow you to move your body, an as a result you can avoid heart diseases.

However, with regard to social aspects, video games have more benefits. If gamers play online, they could know other people around the world. As a result, they could be part of the community of that video game, they would interact with other gamers. Furthermore, they could improve their ability to work as a team. On the other hand, in other hobbies, the interaction with others isn’t required, like reading, collecting, and writing novels too.

In conclusion, many researches display that the faults of video game are more than benefits. Even if you can improve your ability to be part of a community thanks to playing video games, in general the weaknesses outweigh the benefits. Hopefully, all video games should be programmed with several automatic pauses during the game each hour, as the researchers have demonstrated.

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07/08/2020 10:17:23
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Many people, and children in particular, enjoy playing computer games. While I accept that these games can sometimes have a positive effect on the user, I believe that they are more likely to have a harmful impact.

On the one hand, video games can be both entertaining and educational. Users, or gamers, are transported into virtual worlds which are often more exciting and engaging than real-life pastimes. From an educational perspective, these games encourage imagination and creativity, as well as concentration, logical thinking and problem solving, all of which are useful skills outside the gaming context. Furthermore, it has been shown that computer simulation games can improve users’ motor skills and help to prepare them for real-world tasks, such as flying a plane.

However, I would argue that these benefits are outweighed by the drawbacks. Gaming can be highly addictive because users are constantly given scores, new targets and frequent rewards to keep them playing. Many children now spend hours each day trying to progress through the levels of a game or to get a higher score than their friends. This type of addiction can have effects ranging from lack of sleep to problems at school, when homework is sacrificed for a few more hours on the computer or console. The rise in obesity in recent years has also been linked in part to the sedentary lifestyle and lack of exercise that often accompany gaming addiction.

In conclusion, it seems to me that the potential dangers of video games are more significant than the possible benefits.

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07/08/2020 17:58:34
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Video games will help us relax after hard working days but we should not spend too much time playing video games because playing too much will make us tired of thinking. There are a lot of bad things that will happen if we play video games too much, so instead of just plugging in our face into video games, we can just go with their personal preferences. Since it will make us more comfortable, create more laughter for us, in our opinion, we should spend more time on our hobbies and be able to play a game. a little bit of video game when I'm too bored

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