Hi! My name's Jennifer. I am ten years old. I'm a pupil at Hoa Nghia Primary school. My family has six people.My grandparents, my parents, my sister and me.My house has one floor and it has seven rooms. They are three bedrooms, two bathrooms, one livingroom and one kitchen. My room has a bed, a rug, a lamp, a desk, a chair, a wardrobe, a TV and a book shelf. My parents's room has a bed, a rug, a lamp, a table, two chair, a wardrobe and a wedding photo. My grandparents's room has a bed, a rug, a chair, a table, a TV and a lamp. In the kitchen, mu ( my ) grandma and my mum are often cook dilicious ( delicious ) rice dishes for the whole family. I kike kitchen ( I like the kitchen ) . Because every evening, my family are surounded ( surrounded ) by a large tray of rice. I love my house very much.
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