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When you think about Silk, the first thing you think of is the region of Bao Loc. Bao Loc Silk Group is one of the biggest factory about silk in Bao Loc. Last week we have a memorable trip to the factory, Bao Loc Silk Factory located at an altitude of over 800m, 190 km from Ho Chi Minh city and 110 km from Da Lat city, Bao Loc plateau is cool all year around wwith hight rainfall, humidity and mist, suitable for growing mulberries and raising silk worms. Therefore, it has become the “capital” of the sericulture sector wth large silk producing fatories, such as A ChauSilk Joint-Stock Company, Kimono Company, Vietsilk Company and about 20 private silk production workshops
At present, Bao Loc produces over 20 different categories, such as satin, crepedechine (CDC), jacquard, Habutai, oganza, Geogretee (GGT.Voal), Taffetas and visco mixed fabrics and cotton mixed. Bao Loc silk is smooth, soft and glossy. Thanks to modern technologies from Japan and South Korea, the silk production in Bao Loc strongly develops. The way to make silk is not simple. First we have select the cocoon carefully and then boil cocoon. Next, the cocoon are uncoupled then twisted. Silk is soaked in the dye. The last step is to weave the fabric.
Silk has a lot of uses. Silk clothing is very suitable for the hot weather . Silk clothing is also suitable for cold weather because less heat conduction silk makes the wearer warmer. Because silk looks elegant, iridescent should be used as curtains, curtains. In addition to making clothing and making crafts, silk is also used as a parachute (for jumping), bicycle tires, blankets and bags of gunpowder. The armor was previously made from silk until World War I.

Bao Loc silk products have long been popular with customers in the country and abroad, rich models, diverse types, stable quality. Fashion Bao Loc silk combines harmony between traditional and modern.