1. My father prefers watching films at home than going to the cinema.
Correction: My father prefers watching films at home rather than going to the cinema.

2. Women nowadays have more free to participate in social activities.
Correction: Women nowadays have more freedom to participate in social activities.

3. She had the gardener to plant some trees.
Correction: She had the gardener plant some trees.

4. The church where we are going to visit isn't far from here.
Correction: The church we are going to visit isn't far from here.

5. Come up to my place and we will discuss it.
Correction: Come to my place and we will discuss it.