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Identify and correct 10 mistakes in the following passage

EXERCISE 2 : Identify and correct 10 mistakes in the following passage.
When Alaska became one of the United States in 1959, it increased the size of
the USA to a fifth. Yet this huge state, with the largest mountain in North America, has the smallest second population. This means that there are still large numbers of wild animals such as
polar bears, mosse and seals, and trapping and hunting are major businesses. The largest group of native people live
in Alaska is the Inuit, who used to be known Eskimos. Most of them hunt or fish, but some of those living in cities are involved in government work.
Anchorage is the largest city in the state, with a population of around 230,000. In 1964, large areas of the city centre was destroyed in an earthquake but the people soon rebuilt the officers and apartment buildings.Despite it is only 571 kilometres south of the Arctic Circle, Anchorage has a surprisingly
mild weather. Because of its remote location, Anchorage attracts many tourists who want to experience life in the wild, a considerate number of them fly Into Anchorage international
Airport before renting a pilot and setting off into the remote areas of Alaska
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**Corrected Passage:**

When Alaska became one of the United States in 1959, it increased the size of the USA to one-fifth. Yet this huge state, with the largest mountain in North America, has the second smallest population. This means that there are still large numbers of wild animals such as polar bears, moose, and seals, and trapping and hunting are major businesses. The largest group of native people living in Alaska is the Inuit, who were formerly known as Eskimos. Most of them hunt or fish, but some of those living in cities are involved in government work. Anchorage is the largest city in the state, with a population of around 230,000. In 1964, large areas of the city center were destroyed in an earthquake, but the people soon rebuilt the offices and apartment buildings. Despite being only 571 kilometers south of the Arctic Circle, Anchorage has surprisingly mild weather. Because of its remote location, Anchorage attracts many tourists who want to experience life in the wild; a considerable number of them fly into Anchorage International Airport before renting a pilot and setting off into the remote areas of Alaska.

**List of Corrections:**

1. "to a fifth" → "to one-fifth" (clarified expression).
2. "the smallest second population" → "the second smallest population" (correct word order).
3. "mosse" → "moose" (spelling error).
4. "live in Alaska is the Inuit" → "living in Alaska is the Inuit" (correct grammatical structure).
5. "who used to be known Eskimos" → "who were formerly known as Eskimos" (correct tense and phrasing).
6. "was destroyed" → "were destroyed" (correct subject-verb agreement).
7. "the officers and apartment buildings" → "the offices and apartment buildings" (spelling error).
8. "Despite it is" → "Despite being" (correct grammatical structure).
9. "mild weather" → "surprisingly mild weather" (added the word 'surprisingly' for clarity).
10. "a considerate number of them fly Into" → "a considerable number of them fly into" (correct wording and casing).
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Trúc Mai
23/07 10:08:14
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1. **Đáp án**: 
   - "the smallest second population" → "the second smallest population"
   - "mosse" → "moose"
   - "live in Alaska is the Inuit" → "live in Alaska are the Inuit"
   - "known Eskimos" → "known as Eskimos"
   - "the officers and apartment buildings" → "the offices and apartment buildings"
   - "it is only" → "it is"
   - "mild weather" → "mild weather conditions"
   - "a considerate number of them" → "a considerable number of them"
   - "fly Into Anchorage international Airport" → "fly into Anchorage International Airport"
   - "renting a pilot" → "renting a plane"
 
2. **Giải thích**:
   - "the smallest second population" → Câu này cần sửa thành "the second smallest population" để diễn đạt đúng ý nghĩa là Alaska có dân số nhỏ thứ hai.
   - "mosse" → Đây là lỗi chính tả, từ đúng là "moose" (hươu đuôi bàng).
   - "live in Alaska is the Inuit" → Câu này cần sửa thành "live in Alaska are the Inuit" để đảm bảo ngữ pháp đúng.
   - "known Eskimos" → Cần thêm "as" để câu trở nên chính xác: "known as Eskimos".
   - "the officers and apartment buildings" → "officers" là sai, cần sửa thành "offices" (văn phòng).
   - "it is only" → Câu này cần bỏ "it" để trở thành "is only" cho đúng ngữ pháp.
   - "mild weather" → Cần thêm "conditions" để câu trở nên chính xác hơn: "mild weather conditions".
   - "a considerate number of them" → "considerate" không đúng trong ngữ cảnh này, cần sửa thành "considerable" (đáng kể).
   - "fly Into Anchorage international Airport" → "Into" cần viết thường và "international" cần viết hoa: "fly into Anchorage International Airport".
   - "renting a pilot" → Câu này cần sửa thành "renting a plane" vì "pilot" không phải là thứ mà người ta thuê để bay.

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Trung Trần
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10 lỗi và cách sửa:
 
1. **Lỗi:** "to a fifth"
**Sửa:** "by a fifth" (tăng lên một phần năm)
2. **Lỗi:** "the smallest second population"
**Sửa:** "the second smallest population" (dân số nhỏ thứ hai)
3. **Lỗi:** "mosse"
**Sửa:** "moose" (hươu nai)
4. **Lỗi:** "The largest group of native people live in Alaska is the Inuit"
**Sửa:** "The largest group of native people in Alaska is the Inuit" (Nhóm người bản địa lớn nhất ở Alaska là người Inuit)
5. **Lỗi:** "Eskimos"
**Sửa:** "Inuit" (Người Inuit)
6. **Lỗi:** "was destroyed"
**Sửa:** "were destroyed" (bị phá hủy)
7. **Lỗi:** "the officers"
**Sửa:** "the offices" (các văn phòng)
8. **Lỗi:** "Despite it is only"
**Sửa:** "Despite being only" (Mặc dù chỉ cách)
9. **Lỗi:** "mild weather"
**Sửa:** "mild climate" (khí hậu ôn hòa)
10. **Lỗi:** "a considerate number"
**Sửa:** "a considerable number" (một số lượng đáng kể)
 
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When Alaska became one of the United States in 1959, it increased the size of the USA by a fifth. Yet this huge state, with the largest mountain in North America, has the second smallest population. This means that there are still large numbers of wild animals such as polar bears, moose and seals, and trapping and hunting are major businesses. The largest group of native people in Alaska is the Inuit, who used to be known as Inuit. Most of them hunt or fish, but some of those living in cities are involved in government work. Anchorage is the largest city in the state, with a population of around 230,000. In 1964, large areas of the city centre were destroyed in an earthquake but the people soon rebuilt the offices and apartment buildings. Despite being only 571 kilometres south of the Arctic Circle, Anchorage has a surprisingly mild climate. Because of its remote location, Anchorage attracts many tourists who want to experience life in the wild, a considerable number of them fly into Anchorage international Airport before renting a pilot and setting off into the remote areas of Alaska. 
 

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