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10 lỗi và cách sửa:
1. **Lỗi:** "to a fifth"
**Sửa:** "by a fifth" (tăng lên một phần năm)
2. **Lỗi:** "the smallest second population"
**Sửa:** "the second smallest population" (dân số nhỏ thứ hai)
3. **Lỗi:** "mosse"
**Sửa:** "moose" (hươu nai)
4. **Lỗi:** "The largest group of native people live in Alaska is the Inuit"
**Sửa:** "The largest group of native people in Alaska is the Inuit" (Nhóm người bản địa lớn nhất ở Alaska là người Inuit)
5. **Lỗi:** "Eskimos"
**Sửa:** "Inuit" (Người Inuit)
6. **Lỗi:** "was destroyed"
**Sửa:** "were destroyed" (bị phá hủy)
7. **Lỗi:** "the officers"
**Sửa:** "the offices" (các văn phòng)
8. **Lỗi:** "Despite it is only"
**Sửa:** "Despite being only" (Mặc dù chỉ cách)
9. **Lỗi:** "mild weather"
**Sửa:** "mild climate" (khí hậu ôn hòa)
10. **Lỗi:** "a considerate number"
**Sửa:** "a considerable number" (một số lượng đáng kể)
Đoạn văn đã sửa:
When Alaska became one of the United States in 1959, it increased the size of the USA by a fifth. Yet this huge state, with the largest mountain in North America, has the second smallest population. This means that there are still large numbers of wild animals such as polar bears, moose and seals, and trapping and hunting are major businesses. The largest group of native people in Alaska is the Inuit, who used to be known as Inuit. Most of them hunt or fish, but some of those living in cities are involved in government work. Anchorage is the largest city in the state, with a population of around 230,000. In 1964, large areas of the city centre were destroyed in an earthquake but the people soon rebuilt the offices and apartment buildings. Despite being only 571 kilometres south of the Arctic Circle, Anchorage has a surprisingly mild climate. Because of its remote location, Anchorage attracts many tourists who want to experience life in the wild, a considerable number of them fly into Anchorage international Airport before renting a pilot and setting off into the remote areas of Alaska.