Although the rise in unemployment, people still seem to be spending more.
*Error: Should be "Despite the rise in unemployment".

Despite he had a good salary, he was unhappy in his job.
*Error: Should be "Despite having a good salary" or "Despite the fact that he had a good salary".

Although the time of the year, yesterday’s temperature was hot enough to turn on the air conditioning.
*Error: Should be "Despite the time of the year".

In spite of the quantity was small, we had enough supplies to finish the experiment.
*Error: Should be "In spite of the fact that the quantity was small" or "Despite the small quantity".

However she looks very young, she is twice as old as my twenty-year old sister.
*Error: Should be "Although she looks very young".

Despite of his smiling face, the second place contestant is sadder than the winner.
*Error: Should be "Despite his smiling face".

Gold was one of the first to be discovered despite it is one of the rarest metals.
*Error: Should be "despite its being one of the rarest metals".

Polar bears rarely kill people in spite they hunt other animals.
*Error: Should be "in spite of the fact that they hunt other animals" or "although they hunt other animals".

Even though the extremely bad weather in the mountain, the climbers decided not to cancel their climb.
*Error: Should be "Even though there was extremely bad weather in the mountain".   

Although the harm of smoking, smokers can’t get rid it.
*Error: Should be "Although smoking is harmful".

 

55. **Lỗi:** "people still seem to be spending more."
**Sửa:** "people still seem to spend more."

56. **Lỗi:** "he was unhappy in his job."
**Sửa:** "he was unhappy with his job."

57. **Lỗi:** "yesterday’s temperature was hot enough to turn on the air conditioning."
**Sửa:** "yesterday’s temperature was too hot to turn on the air conditioning."

58. **Lỗi:** "In spite of the quantity was small,"
**Sửa:** "In spite of the small quantity,"

59. **Lỗi:** "twice as old as my twenty-year-old sister."
**Sửa:** "twice as old as my twenty-year-old sister."

60. **Lỗi:** "the second place contestant is sadder than the winner."
**Sửa:** "the second place contestant was sadder than the winner."

61. **Lỗi:** "to be discovered despite it is one of the rarest metals."
**Sửa:** "to be discovered despite being one of the rarest metals."

62. **Lỗi:** "rarely kill people in spite they hunt other animals."
**Sửa:** "rarely kill people; instead, they hunt other animals."

63. **Lỗi:** "the extremely bad weather in the mountain,"
**Sửa:** "the extremely bad weather in the mountains,"

64. **Lỗi:** "smokers can’t get rid it."
**Sửa:** "smokers can’t get rid of it.