Hello everyone! Today I'll tell you about my house. I live in a big house in the countryside and it is very beautiful. It has a living room, a kitchen, three bedrooms and two bathrooms. In the living room, there is a table, four chairs, a television and an air conditioner. My bedroom is very nice. There is a computer, a bed, a lamp and two pictures on the wall. And a bookshelf above the table, some teddy bears on the bed and a wardrobe. The kitchen has a refrigerator, a stove and a sink. Next to the kitchen is the bathroom. It has a shower, a washing machine and a tub. I love my house very much.

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Chào mọi người! Hôm nay tôi sẽ nói với bạn về nhà tôi. Tôi sống trong một ngôi nhà lớn ở nông thôn và nó rất đẹp. Nó có một phòng khách, nhà bếp, ba phòng ngủ và hai phòng tắm. Trong phòng khách, có một bảng, bốn cái ghế, một tivi và một máy điều hòa. Phòng ngủ của tôi rất đẹp. Có một máy tính, một chiếc giường, một chiếc đèn và hai bức tranh trên tường. Và một kệ sách ở trên bàn, một số gấu bông trên giường và tủ quần áo. Các nhà bếp có tủ lạnh, bếp và chậu rửa. Tiếp đến là nhà bếp là phòng tắm. Nó có vòi sen, máy giặt và một bồn tắm. Tôi yêu nhà tôi rất nhiều.

Here is my writing on the "My Dream House". I would be grateful if someone would review my essay and give me feedback on the sentence structure and grammar of writing.
My Dream House
House is a place where we can shelter and it gives us a protection from rain, heat , storm etc. Everyone has their own choice on what type of house they feel comfortable to live, so do I. I enjoy to live in calm and open environment, so house built on small land won't be my choice. I want a large open space surrounded by compound where I can stroll especially when I feel bored on my job. I want the garden in front of my house which will give me natural environment. One more thing to mention here, I want the house which is far from main city and industrial area since I don't like the noisy environment.Oh, yeah, what about the size of the house? I prefer the medium size house having 2 or 3 floors. I don't like very large building because I have small family and I don't like to rent my home. I prefer to stay in second or ground floor during the summer season because the top floor is excessively heated during the very season whereas I like to stay in second or third floor during the winter as ground floor will be excessively cold during that period. Next thing is about gym room, I would like to have a fitness center within my premise as I am a young boy and I want to be a healthy person.
I have mentioned so many physical needs in my above paragraph but I would like to conculde my writing saying cool and amicable family environment is must to make our home like a heaven. Otherwise, it will be a hell and we would like to spend most of our time outside the home rather than with family.
Thanks

My dream house will be a smart house.It will be on the island.It will have 40 rooms.There will be a swimming pool,a supermarket,a theatre,a cinema,a park,a bakery,a townsquare,a car shop,a gas station,...My house will have some robots.They will help me do the housework.