Here are the corrections for the underlined parts:
She meets (A) an (B) old friend at (C) a (D) dinner party last weekend.
- Correction: She met an old friend at a dinner party last weekend.
There are (A) a big traffic jam on (B) the road to (C) the (D) downtown.
- Correction: There is a big traffic jam on the road to downtown.
The (A) teachers had (B) a meeting at (C) 6 o'clock on the afternoon.
- Correction: The teachers had a meeting at 6 o'clock in the afternoon.
We have a (A) smoke detector on (B) the ceiling in (C) each classrooms (D).
- Correction: We have a smoke detector on the ceiling in each classroom.
She don't know (A) whether she left (B) her book at (C) school or on (D) the bus.
- Correction: She doesn't know whether she left her book at school or on the bus.
Schools in (A) America are (B) closed at (C) Thanksgiving Day and the (D) day after.
- Correction: Schools in America are closed on Thanksgiving Day and the day after.
We can find out (A) about schools in (B) the past by (C) looking to (D) evidence.
- Correction: We can find out about schools in the past by looking at evidence.
I heard a heavy (A) footstep on (B) the stairs when I close (C) my book at (D) 9.30 p.m.
- Correction: I heard heavy footsteps on the stairs when I closed my book at 9.30 p.m.
The (A) students love camping (B) on (C) the mountain on summer holidays (D).
- Correction: The students love camping in the mountains on summer holidays.
In (A) some cities, people don't feel safety (B) when going (C) out alone at (D) night.
- Correction: In some cities, people don't feel safe when going out alone at night.