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Referring to the famous landscapes of Vietnam, we always think of Ha Long bay, Hoan Kiem lake ... But the south central coast has a picturesque ancient city  and captivated the people - Hoi An.

Hoi An city is located on the north bank of Thu Bon river, 30km southeast of Da Nang city.

 Hoi An was born in the second half of the 16th century under the reign of the Le Dynasty.

At that time, Hoi An became the busiest international trading port in Southeast Asia due to the economic development and the expansion of trade and trade with foreign countries.

Hoi An, a city with eternal beauty despite thousands of years, has beautiful architecture that attracts visitors to visit. Traditional architectural beauty is in harmony with the houses, walls and streets as the idyllic character of the people here. Besides, Hoi An still retains historical relics from ancient times. It is a unique image of Cau Pagoda that has become a symbol of Hoi An. Or to learn more about the life and culture of Hoi An, visitors can visit some ancient houses such as Tan Ky, Quan thang ..

Unlike other lands in Vietnam, Hoi An has a very different and extremely diverse culture. Hoi An has many different beliefs and each deity represents something.

Visiting festivals in Hoi An visitors is very surprised by its abundance. On the coast in the fishing villages, there are also boat racing festivals, especially the annual full-moon festival in the old town. In addition, Hoi An's music is tradition  music by famous artists.

Besides, Hoi An also has many delicious dishes that leave an impression on visitors such as dumplings, cao lau ...

Hoi An is recognized by unesco as a world cultural heritage and it deserves to be an attractive destination for tourists.


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