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Read the passage below, which contains 10 mistakes. Identify the mistakes and write the corrections in the corresponding numbered boxes

Read the passage below, which contains 10 mistakes. Identify the mistakes and write the corrections in the corresponding numbered boxes.

Stress is often called a 21st century illness but it has always been with us if perhaps with different names. These days we regard stress like a necessary evil of modern living. Yet stress is not negative and without it we will not enjoy some of the highpoints in life such as the anticipation after a date or the tension leading up to an important match. All these situations produce stress but if you can control it and not the other way around, you will feel stimulated, not worn out. However, unlike these situations, which are generally positive but easier to deal with, sitting in a train that is running late, being stuck in a traffic jam or work to a tight deadline are much harder to manage and control and can be a significant cause of stress. Stress is now recognised as a medicine problem and as a significant factor in causing coronary heart disease, high blood pressure and a high cholesterol count. Patients are often willing to admit to stress problems because they feel they are a form of socially failure and it is important that symptoms are identifying in order to avoid unnecessary sufferings. So what should we be looking out for as danger signals? Common signs of stress are increased tiredness, irritability and an ability to cope with certain situations.

 

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Here are the identified mistakes and their corrections:

1. **"21st century"**
Correction: **"21st-century"**
Explanation: Use a hyphen when using "21st-century" as a compound adjective.

2. **"if perhaps"**
Correction: **"or perhaps"**
Explanation: "or perhaps" makes more sense in this context to indicate an alternative.

3. **"like a necessary evil"**
Correction: **"as a necessary evil"**
Explanation: "as" is the correct preposition to use in this context.

4. **"not negative"**
Correction: **"not entirely negative"**
Explanation: Adding "entirely" clarifies the meaning and prevents a double negative.

5. **"but easier to deal with"**
Correction: **"but are easier to deal with"**
Explanation: Adding "are" is needed for grammatical correctness.

6. **"work to a tight deadline"**
Correction: **"working to a tight deadline"**
Explanation: "working" is the correct form to match the gerund structure.

7. **"as a medicine problem"**
Correction: **"as a mental health problem"**
Explanation: "mental health" is the appropriate term in this context.

8. **"a form of socially failure"**
Correction: **"a form of social failure"**
Explanation: "social" is the correct adjective form.

9. **"are identifying"**
Correction: **"are identified"**
Explanation: The passive voice is needed here.

10. **"unnecessary sufferings"**
Correction: **"unnecessary suffering"**
Explanation: "Suffering" is typically an uncountable noun in this context.

Here’s the corrected passage with the mistakes addressed:

Stress is often called a **21st-century** illness but it has always been with us **or perhaps** with different names. These days we regard stress **as** a necessary evil of modern living. Yet stress is **not entirely negative** and without it we will not enjoy some of the highpoints in life such as the anticipation after a date or the tension leading up to an important match. All these situations produce stress but if you can control it and not the other way around, you will feel stimulated, not worn out. However, unlike these situations, which are generally positive **but are** easier to deal with, sitting in a train that is running late, being stuck in a traffic jam or **working** to a tight deadline are much harder to manage and control and can be a significant cause of stress. Stress is now recognised as a **mental health** problem and as a significant factor in causing coronary heart disease, high blood pressure and a high cholesterol count. Patients are often willing to admit to stress problems because they feel they are a form of **social failure** and it is important that symptoms **are identified** in order to avoid unnecessary **suffering**. So what should we be looking out for as danger signals? Common signs of stress are increased tiredness, irritability and an ability to cope with certain situations.
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Thu Phuong
25/08 09:35:49
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Here are the identifie***istakes along with their corrections:

1. **21st century illness** → **21st-century illness** (Add a hyphen)
2. **if perhaps with different names** → **if perhaps under different names** (Change "with" to "under")
3. **regard stress like a necessary evil** → **regard stress as a necessary evil** (Change "like" to "as")
4. **not the other way around** → **not the other way around,** (Add a comma before "you")
5. **work to a tight deadline** → **working to a tight deadline** (Change "work" to "working")
6. **medicine problem** → **medical problem** (Change "medicine" to "medical")
7. **socially failure** → **social failure** (Change "socially" to "social")
8. **are identifying** → **are identified** (Change "identifying" to "identified")
9. **unnecessary sufferings** → **unnecessary suffering** (Change "sufferings" to "suffering")
10. **as danger signals** → **as danger signals?** (Add a question mark)

Please let me know if you need further ***istance!

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25/08 09:56:16
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  1. ifthough

    Correct sentence: Stress is often called a 21st-century illness but it has always been with us, though perhaps with different names.

  2. likeas

    Correct sentence: These days we regard stress as a necessary evil of modern living.

  3. willwould

    Correct sentence: Yet stress is not negative and without it we would not enjoy some of the highpoints in life.

  4. afterbefore

    Correct sentence: ...such as the anticipation before a date or the tension leading up to an important match.

  5. butand

    Correct sentence: All these situations produce stress and if you can control it and not the other way around, you will feel stimulated, not worn out.

  6. workworking

    Correct sentence: ...sitting in a train that is running late, being stuck in a traffic jam or working to a tight deadline are much harder to manage and control...

  7. medicinemedical

    Correct sentence: Stress is now recognised as a medical problem and as a significant factor in causing coronary heart disease...

  8. sociallysocial

    Correct sentence: ...because they feel they are a form of social failure...

  9. identifyingidentified

    Correct sentence: ...it is important that symptoms are identified in order to avoid unnecessary sufferings.

  10. an abilityan inability

    Correct sentence: Common signs of stress are increased tiredness, irritability, and an inability to cope with certain situations.

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25/08 10:26:21
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Mistakes in the passage:

  1. "if perhaps with different names" → "if not perhaps with different names"
  2. "like a necessary evil" → "as a necessary evil"
  3. "Yet stress is not negative" → "Yet stress is not always negative"
  4. "if you can control it and not the other way around" → "if you can control it and not let it control you"
  5. "but easier to deal with" → "but are easier to deal with"
  6. "work to a tight deadline" → "working to a tight deadline"
  7. "as a medicine problem" → "as a medical problem"
  8. "and as a significant factor" → "and is a significant factor"
  9. "Patients are often willing to admit to stress problems because they feel they are a form of socially failure" → "Patients are often unwilling to admit to stress problems because they feel they are a form of social failure"
  10. "and an ability to cope with certain situations" → "and an inability to cope with certain situations"

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